3nd time i edit!
A reader told me that this post sound emo and its as if i am talking to myself, disclaimer: NO, it is over the years people keep telling me their world is crap and girls are their life, but then they move on, so stop overdramatizing!!! haha, so this is written for you losers out there =p
OK I PUT BACK ORIGINAL (with a slight edit =p) ok no more editing! i'm so a people pleaser=p
Verse1:
Have you turn on the lights in your room?
You told me that life is not worth living
Can i have your playstation and xbox too?
Chorus:
Don't come up to me saying you're sorry
Don't make things so big when its small
Life is great don't make it so corny
You're not the only one after all
Verse 2:
You said she was the prettiest one you've seen
I say are you sure? My mom's better and she ain't eighteen
You say you've fallen in love and she's the one
I say cool, when you break up i'll be having fun
Chorus:
Don't come up to me saying you're sorry
Don't make things so big when its small
Life is great don't make it so corny
You're not the only one after all
Bridge:
So sometimes you see things your way
You bullshit in the things you say
When you stumble upon the truth someday
I hope that you will be okay
I hope that you will be okay
Verse 3:
You told me now you know you're a fool
I'm glad that you don't just see glass half full
You ask how could this be any better?
I say at least you and i are together
At least you and i are together
Chorus:
Don't come up to me saying you're sorry
Don't make things so big when its small
Life is great don't make it so corny
You're not the only one after all
Now we're seeing things together
Lets live life that matters
Don't ever ever say never
Least you and i are together, you and i are together
You and i are together
-End-
9 comments:
The last part is so gay! Please record it, or play it for me, I wanna hear! :)
haha, ok!
Why you change the lyrics!!! !@#&$^%&@*
I like the first one better, the one with stay together. This edit is CRAPPY.
Changing lyrics is blasphemous. It's like... changing the lyrics from "Jesus, lover of my soul" to "Jesus, owner of my soul" because it doesn't sound as good anymore!
you make a good point. when we jamming? HAHA
eh you wrote this??? super cool! =)
thanks!
Ah, better than the second version, but the first is still the BEST!
If we jam, we go with the first, the ORIGINAL :P
Awesome. I think I fell off my chair after v.2.
But seriously, this is quite inspiring; I just might dust off the guitar and try this out. If anything ever (ever) comes of it, bug me for the royalties.
really? cool! do it. let me have some cash roll in for once for something i've written hahaha!
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